| Though I'm not sure about the distinction you are making between | "complies" and "will comply". | You're right: the words "that will transit the NSFNET backbone" | makes "will comply" superfluous, so "complies" will do. | | But I will run it by some others here just to be sure we aren't | taking the law unto ourselves, so to speak. | Of course! | | OK, after this first pass through the text, I'm getting | even more picky: networks cannot agree to anything, only | their administrators can! So here's my latest & greatest | proposal for a new text: | | The administrators of the following networks for which access is | requested to the NSFNET backbone, agree that traffic from these | networks that will transit the NSFNET backbone complies with the | "NSFNET BACKBONE SERVICES ACCEPTABLE USE POLICY" dated June 1992 | | Piet There is a missing comma. One should be placed after the word "networks" on the first line.