| OK, after this first pass through the text, I'm getting | even more picky: networks cannot agree to anything, only | their administrators can! So here's my latest & greatest | proposal for a new text: | | The administrators of the following networks for which access is | requested to the NSFNET backbone, agree that traffic from these | networks that will transit the NSFNET backbone complies with the | "NSFNET BACKBONE SERVICES ACCEPTABLE USE POLICY" dated June 1992 | | Piet There is a missing comma. One should be placed after the word "networks" on the first line. Yech, you're spoiling the perfect layout. :-) But I'm wondering if adding that comma is indeed appropriate: the way I read the sentence then, the "for which" denotes the administrators, not the networks. Piet