AS7007 incident - would someone please "fix" the article?

There's a wikipedia article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AS_7007_incident .. that a post I wrote up for a local computer club magazine somehow suffices as primary reference material for. Even though I think this is partially hilarious, would someone mind making it a little more authoritive and well-referenced? My article was definitely not written to be used as any form of source, primary or otherwise. :-) Thanks! Adrian